New ME3 Fanfic Ending Adds Choice of Squad-mates and Romances.

Chapter 10 is complete. 4100 words about. Big developments in this chapter. DO NOT READ IT unless you have read all the chapters before. It will spoil major plot points in the previous chapters. It also creates new ones for the second half of the book.

To start from the beginning Read Chapter 1:

http://collegeage.me/side-story-resistance-earth/

Chapter 10:

http://collegeage.me/chapter-10-the-devil-within/

Despite publishing 2 rockstar magnitude chapters in the last 2 days (5,000 and 4,000 words long. That's 9,000 words in two days. Think of the last time you wrote a 1,800 word essay and multiply that by 5.) the site has suffered low traffic in the 300's.

If you like it, share it.

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40,100 views all-time Just past 40k! Woohoo I'm catching up to you Facebook Page!

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The first 750 words. The first section of Chapter 11 is up. Finally I'm back in the right writing frame of mind.

http://collegeage.me/chapter-11-hades-dogs/

Chapter 11: Hades’ Dogs
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- Chapter 11: Hades’ Dogs - “This Lawson guy, I don’t trust him.” Leo said. The small band of Blue Suns mercenaries were dropping into the lower atmosphere of the planet Hor...

I ported the 40,000 word (so far) novel into a word-processor document. There are only a handful of typo's so it's no big deal. I'll fix them once the novel is complete.

When it is done and that will be in the next two weeks. I will submi

t the manuscript to Bioware and Del Ray for review. Even though I know they'll reject it. Because all their books are contracted. It will be worth trying. If only to try. It is disappointing though, because the Novel is good. It's really good. And they should at least read it. Even though I know they won't.

http://collegeage.me/mass-effect-novel/

Chapter 11 is finished. http://collegeage.me/chapter-11-hades-dogs/

Somebody shoot me,

Someone wrote: "A for effort, C for not researching the romances before writing romance specific dialogue. imported romance Kaidan tells femshep he loves her on Mars, then again in Huerta hospital, then just before he comes aboard the Normandy, yet again during dinner, and lastly during romance scene. fresh romance Kaidan tells her he has feelings for her during Dinner and "I love you" during romance scene.

moreover - there are no rules against Spectre's fraternizing.

so I'm assuming the rest of the romance dialogues will have similar issues."

http://collegeage.me/soldier-class/me3-femshep-soldier-ending-with-kaidan-and-garrus-kaidan-romance/

My reply: Ahem, ANDERSON, IS RIGHT THERE, which he wasn't during the romance scenes. And it turns out if you read on that Anderson makes that claim about there being no rules regarding Fraternization between Spectres. The concern Kaidan has is over the Alliance regulation that may still apply to them.

I hope that clears that up for you.

As a matter of fact I did research all the romance scenes. For every game for every character for every gender of Shepard. I spent countless hours watching the whole sequences from start to finish before writing each section.

Ok, I finished chapter 12 at 3000 words. The chapters are going to get shorter slightly now that we're through the middle of the book and gaining on the end. 20 Chapters is the goal and Chapter 13 starts now.

http://collegeage.me/chapter-12-transhuman/

The first third. The first complete section of Chapter 13 is available now.

http://collegeage.me/chapter-13-phenomenon/

Chapter 13 is complete. I love this chapter, I couldn't imagine it fitting into place more perfectly.

http://collegeage.me/chapter-13-phenomenon/

Getting real close to the ending of this book. I'm excited. Like I got excited on Virmire near the end of Mass Effect. Its hard to believe we've all come this far. Thank you to everyone of my readers. This book is sensational.

http://collegeage.me/chapter-13-phenomenon/

Only 2 chapters away from the end. The epilogue for this one is going to be the big finish. 2 Days left on this novel. After that it will be available to read for about a week and a half. Then it'll be shut down while I submit it for possible publishing. See it while it's still fresh.

http://collegeage.me/chapter-14-aeon/

I may need a little help to get this published but one way or another there'll be a book. And you'll be getting my autograph.

http://collegeage.me/chapter-14-aeon/

The book is now finished, You may begin reading it here:

http://collegeage.me/mass-effect-novel/

You may finish it Here:

http://collegeage.me/epilogue/